This is looking so much better already. I think we can still make a few tweaks but this shows far better skills and a deeper understanding of conventions.
Last few changes: - move 'coming soon' to the bottom of the page, shrink it, and add a tagline at the top - make the billing block more conventional; change the size of the job roles and put all names on the same lines as the job roles - make the certificate smaller and add some production company logos, then, put them under the billing block either side of the 'coming soon' - make Sam paler and give him a ghostly glow.
Natalka,
ReplyDeleteThis is looking so much better already. I think we can still make a few tweaks but this shows far better skills and a deeper understanding of conventions.
Last few changes:
- move 'coming soon' to the bottom of the page, shrink it, and add a tagline at the top
- make the billing block more conventional; change the size of the job roles and put all names on the same lines as the job roles
- make the certificate smaller and add some production company logos, then, put them under the billing block either side of the 'coming soon'
- make Sam paler and give him a ghostly glow.
Great stuff,
EllieB