This is much improved - well done. Just some small changes to make now: - tidy the edges on the top and right side of your hair - make Sam appear 'ghostly' - change the colour of the cover lines (the blue ones) as they are a little hard to read - change the font for the web address to something more like the cover lines - maybe add some boxes behind the cover lines to make them stand out more - change the spacing on the bottom border - the gaps are too big between words but not big enough between the titles.
Natalka,
ReplyDeleteThis is much improved - well done. Just some small changes to make now:
- tidy the edges on the top and right side of your hair
- make Sam appear 'ghostly'
- change the colour of the cover lines (the blue ones) as they are a little hard to read
- change the font for the web address to something more like the cover lines
- maybe add some boxes behind the cover lines to make them stand out more
- change the spacing on the bottom border - the gaps are too big between words but not big enough between the titles.
Great stuff again,
EllieB